[Tides of Time]

9- Not So Bad

5th January, 2017 in Chapter 2: All at Sea
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9- Not So Bad
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5th January, 2017
Jammy
New character incoming! Not going to lie, I'm really looking forward to this.

Comments:

5th January, 2017
This is the best page. It is. I mean it.

Now prove me wrong by uploading even better pages. :D

Where do I even begin? The top two panels are so fantastic. Blue Finley, being an intrinsic irritant, is not a character I much care for, but oh good lord is he PERFECT in those two panels. His dialogue cracked me up, not in the least because all of a sudden, lower-class dialect. It was so perfect and just what I needed this morning.

And the LOOK on Sawbones' FACE. :D That grin~ Best Cheshire impression. ^-^

The panel after Blue stomps off in a huffy fit is my favorite Nate expression. Ungrateful/wary is a good look on him and you did it very well; I'm impressed! I also enjoy his face in the second to last panel. Yeah, I don't believe Sawbones either Nate, I totally understand the feeling.

His eyes in the last panel. XDXD It reminds me of a bug-eyed smiley face. His day just keeps getting worse and worse, doesn't it? Poor guy.

I JUST NOTICED THE CHICKEN ON THE BOAT

WELL PLAYED, SIR. WELL PLAYED.

The only panel that's a little weird is panel five - the dots in the second speech bubble look weird with the face Sawbones is making. I dunno if that's intentional or not, but it did throw me a little when I was reading through the page. Not enough to affect understanding, just a little double-take moment.

Nate. Sweetie. Give in, accept your piratey fate.

You already have the earring, so really, what did you expect? XD
5th January, 2017
Jammy
Hehehe! Of course there's a chicken on the boat! Her name's Cackles. Heheh.

Thanks so much for the feedback, it's really awesome, thank you! ~So glad you like this page. Yeah, I was trying to go for a specific kind of pause/freeze with those dots but it may not be coming across the way I intended. But that's okay. 0w0

Once again, thanks so much!
5th January, 2017
Miaubol
"it's not so awful here"

..just a little ;)
5th January, 2017
Jammy
Heheheh yes, quite! X3
5th January, 2017
azureXtwilight
Sawbones is my favorite character so far!
5th January, 2017
Jammy
Thanks, that's awesome! His dialogue has been very fun X3
5th January, 2017
Bobblit
The first like made me chuckle hard xD. Get lost, bird guy! Rejoin the chickens that apparently nest on board! xD
5th January, 2017
Jammy
Heheheh I'm so glad!

Yeah, heh I'm sure Cackles could use some company. She likes people, people means food.
6th January, 2017
MadJak91
Chopping off limbs is a legit remark, right? :/
I can see it though. Either torturing or as a doctor back then. Infected leg? Off with it! Infected arm? Off with it!
Shudder.
6th January, 2017
Jammy
Well, I think in this instance they're both kinda joking. But it's definitely something Sawbones has had to do before. Yep, medical care in that sort of time isn't that great...
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